关于家的中考英语作文(关于中考英语作文点评)
关于家的中考英语作文
关于家的中考英语作文
关于家的中考英语作文
家对我意义重大。「不管家是多么简陃，家是世界上最好的地方。」我珍视家庭温暖，并且认为家是世界上最光辉的地方之一。
每当我在日常生活中遭遇到困难、失败甚至挫折时，家就是我寻求庇护之所。在家中，我亲爱的父母和兄弟姊妹会安慰我a、鼓励我。而有了他们的关心与鼓舞，我将恢复自信，并能鼓能我的所有的力量和勇气，来面对严酷的生活现实。对我而言，家永远是一种喜悦，我总是可以在其中找到爱、了解、关怀与帮助。
home means a lot to me. be it ever so humble, there is no place like home. i appreciate the warmth of my home, and regard it as one of the brightest and dearest spots on earth.
it is the place where i can take refuge whenever i meet with difficulties, failures and even frustrations in my daily life. at home, my dear parents and brothers and sisters will comfort me and cheer me up. and with their concern and encouragement, i will regain my self-confidence and muster up all my strength and courage to face the stern realities of life. to me, home is forever a joy where i can always find love, understanding, care and help.
关于中考英语作文点评
关于中考英语作文点评
英语写作：中考英语作文点评 “night”指代不明
写作是一项能够充分考查学生语言综合运用能力的题型，也是中考中失分较多的一题。不少考生在练习英语写作时不得法，又苦于找不到提高的有效途径。纵观近年各地中考英语写作题，题材一般是写人、写事、写物、写景、日记、书信、通知、便条等文体。一般来说，不同的写作题材，它的'人物，时间，写作的重点也是不尽相同的，但学生在写作过程中所犯的错误却基本一致。笔者在批阅2007年中考英语作文中发现诸多考生的作文出现了这样那样的问题，我们先看下面考生的作文.
例： (2007年山东枣庄)以“Chinese Spring Festival”为题，写一篇短文。
考生作文
Chinese Spring Festival
The Spring Festival is China’s importantest① festival. It’s the longest holidays②. Most people go back home to get together with their families③.
Before the festival，people are busy prepare④ for it- buying things and cleaning the houses.On the night⑤，the whole family usually celebrate it，for example，they always playing firecrackers，eating delicious foods， watching TV and playing mah-jong and so on.During the festival， they visit friends and relatives， saying “Happy New Year” to each other，and go to park or temple fairs together .People also put on new clothes，and they say “Happy New Year” to each other，visit friends and relatives and go to park or temple fairs⑥. On New Year’s Day ， people often eat delicious food jiaozi. Jiaozi can be made by most people including the old and the kids。
I like jiaozi very much.What about you?